The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart
examine
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the difference between the proportions of world forests and
timber
in
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5 different continents.
Overall
, the vast amounts of forest are in
Africa
and North
America
. Meanwhile,
Africa
is the lowest with
timber
, North
America
is
a
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leader. Back to details,
Africa
and North
America
are
highest
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the highest
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at
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percentage
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the percentage
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of world forests with 27% and one fourth respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of
timber
in
Africa
is 3 times lower
then
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its' figure for forests.
In addition
, North
America
is the
highest-percentage
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of
timber
with 30%. All other regions were in total less
then
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one half and
difference
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the difference
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between each remained region is 2%, starting with
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the lowest-percentage
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lowest-percentage
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lowest percentage
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of
forest
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forests
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Asia with its' 14% and followed by South
America
became the second
of
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timber
with 23% , which is
on
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3% higher
then
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Europa and on 5% with Asia. Despite
this
,
Asias'
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Asia's
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proportion of
timber
is twice as much as
Africas'
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Africa's
Africas'
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, africa, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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