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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided chart
examine
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 the difference between the proportions of world forests and
timber
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in
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 5 different continents.
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, the vast amounts of forest are in
Africa
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 and North
America
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. Meanwhile,
Africa
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 is the lowest with
timber
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, North
America
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 is
a
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 leader. Back to details,
Africa
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 and North
America
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 are
highest
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at
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of world forests with 27% and one fourth respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of
timber
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 in
Africa
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 is 3 times lower
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 its' figure for forests.
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, North
America
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 is the
highest-percentage
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highest percentage
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 of
timber
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 with 30%. All other regions were in total less
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 one half and
difference
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the difference
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 between each remained region is 2%, starting with
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the lowest-percentage
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lowest-percentage
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lowest percentage
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 of
forest
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forests
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 Asia with its' 14% and followed by South
America
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 became the second
of
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timber
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 with 23% , which is
on
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3% higher
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then
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 Europa and on 5% with Asia. Despite
this
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,
Asias'
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Asia's
Asias'
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 proportion of
timber
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 is twice as much as
Africas'
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Africa's
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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