You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, describe what the problem was, tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my frustration that when I was using the swimming
pool
last
week it was extremely dirty.
Moreover
, there were a few leaves of trees floating on one side of the
pool
. Apart from that, when I jumped into the
pool
it contained so much chlorine which made my eyes burn a lot and because of
this
I had to go to an eye specialist.
Furthermore
, I informed the staff that take out all the leaves from the swimming
pool
but they told me that their cleaning equipment has broken and nets of various products has been torn by a rat.
In addition
, I suggest you buy naphthalene balls which will absorb all the excessive chlorine from the
pool
and there is a shop nearby where you can rent cleaning equipment it will be a good option to save your
pool
's reputation currently. I would like you to act upon the above-mentioned on an urgent basis. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil
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