You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, describe what the problem was, tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my frustration that when I was using the swimming

pool

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last

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week it was extremely dirty.

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, there were a few leaves of trees floating on one side of the

pool

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. Apart from that, when I jumped into the

pool

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it contained so much chlorine which made my eyes burn a lot and because of

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I had to go to an eye specialist.

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, I informed the staff that take out all the leaves from the swimming

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but they told me that their cleaning equipment has broken and nets of various products has been torn by a rat.

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, I suggest you buy naphthalene balls which will absorb all the excessive chlorine from the

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and there is a shop nearby where you can rent cleaning equipment it will be a good option to save your

pool

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's reputation currently. I would like you to act upon the above-mentioned on an urgent basis. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil

harshil31099Mon Jan 30 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

170 words

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You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, describe what the problem was, tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views.

Many countries offer a free health care system to their citizens rather than relying on private health care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a free system, and give your opinion.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain answer.