Experts say older people were happier and healteir in the past because they did more excercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions ?

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family
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relationship
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people
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time
with their elderly as
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compared
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to
past
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the past
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so elder
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unheapy
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unhappy
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seen
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detrimentaly
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detrimentally
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essay will provide reasons to old
people
feel bad and give some solutions to solve
this
circumstance. One of the reasons of elderly suffer from loneliness and
helth
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health
issues is forgetting the importance of family
relationship
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relationships
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. In the past, all
family
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families
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lived together and when they suffer from
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or feel sick, they can get support from their family.
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today
,
people
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interrupting
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family
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during
this
period.When
people
become older, they can not help from their family so they feel alone.
Secondly
,in the modern world,
people
do not have enough
time
for family
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because
they work for their
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achievements
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crazy
crazily
. In
this
way,
people
can not visit their
parents
.
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,they can not create
time
for calling.
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, elder
people
do not help from their
children
to fight
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loneliness and
finally
, their
health
become
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becomes
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worse. There are two solutions which are teaching
children
to how
importent
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important
of family
relationship
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relationships
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and
children
need to call their
parents
. First of all,
people
do not have
time
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parent
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as mentioned before so their
relations'
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relations
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strong decrease
in
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time
.
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People
ought to
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teach
how
importent
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important
relationship
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relationships
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as
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are as
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early as possible for
this
reasons
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reason
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and in the future, they will not face
with
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this
problem.
Additionally
,
children
have responsible.
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, call their
parents
to know their
health
,problems etc.
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,
elderly
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the elderly
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do not think that
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am alone or feel upset.
Moreover
.
children
have to visit their family at least twice a year because these are our family and they
reised
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raised
us. In short, if
children
learn the importance level of family
relation ship
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relationship
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and they spent
time
with
it
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them
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,
this
problem can be solved
easly
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easily
.
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everythink
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everything
that has been stated so far, elder
people
feel alone and
health
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their health
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problems getting significant because
people
forget how important
of
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family relations
and
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are and
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people
do not catch
time
for spending
time
with their
parents
.On the other
hands
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, if
people
who
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apply
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spend
time
with family and learn
to
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how important
of
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family
relationship
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relationships
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,
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are, elderly
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elderly
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the elderly
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do not feel alone and upset.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • technological advancements
  • work culture
  • urbanization
  • geographical separation
  • mental health stigma
  • traditional family structures
  • intergenerational living
  • physical activity
  • social interactions
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