The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.

The chart illustrates the money

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used for fast foods

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Jan 30, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is it the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?