You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

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Dear Hotel Manager I was a customer of your hotel and my room number was 302. I already checked out the

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when I was on the way to the airport, I found my laptop was not in my suitcase and I am pretty sure I did not leave it in other places. It is a grey colour Macbook and it is very important to me as I have using it for three years and there are many pictures I took these years and more importantly, there is a contract which I signed with one of my clients. I do not have a copy of it. If I can not find it back, I may lose my job. Is there any chance that you can ask your staff if anyone found it or to check the room again? I already went back to Sydney. Could you deliver it to me If you find it and I will pay the delivery fee? Thank you very much kind regards

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