You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Abhinav, I hope you're okay. You 'll be glad to know that I got my student visa and will be migrating to Australia. Buddy, I need your assistance in finding a part-time job so I can cover my expenses. I am excited that my course starts in April

this

year. I got admission to Princeton college, Melbourne for post-graduation in Artificial Intelligence. It could help me in achieving my goal of becoming a Robotics Engineer. The thing is,

this

is going to be quite expensive and I couldn't be able to afford it unless I get a job. Unfortunately, my scholarship application got rejected too as they had another deserving candidate. I have already applied to suitable companies and one of them has short-listed me. The only condition they put is to provide a local reference. Since we have worked together for 2 years in India, could you please write a letter where you can vouch for my character?

Also

, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude will have a salutary effect on my application. Looking forward to your response and Hopefully meeting soon. Best Regards, Rubina

Submitted by msrubinagill on Mon Jan 30 2023

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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