You ordered an equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell:giving the details about the equipmentexplain the damagesuggest what you want the manager to do.

Dear Manager I ordered a grey colour Macbook
laptop
through the official Apple website
last
week and it has arrived yesterday.
This
laptop
is for my mother's birthday gift and cost me two thousand dollars.
However
, there was
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hole
on
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package
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when I received it. After
i
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opened it and checked the
laptop
clearly, I found that the screen has already been damaged and
i
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can not turn it on. There
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also
some
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on the back of the
laptop
. I already took some pictures and put them in the attachment. Without a doubt, it was
damanged
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damaged
before
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received it.
Hence
, Can I apply
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refund for
this
and I will deliver it back to your company? I will send my bank account information in another email. My mother's birthday is next
friday
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so I can not wait for you to change a new one for me. Thank you very much kind regards
kim
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