All large companies should provide sports facility and social gathering place for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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companies
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sports
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gym
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gyms
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places
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communities
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follwing
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following
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I shall discuss various ways in which these organizations should invest.
Large organizations have Add a comma
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responsibility
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a responsibility
the responsibility
falities
to Correct your spelling
facilities
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their
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employees
communities
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their
employess
that they care about them. Correct your spelling
employees
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compulsory
companies
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percent
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per cent
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employees
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communities
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companies
promote Use synonyms
healthy
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a healthy
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environment
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organization
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activites
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activities
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encouraged
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the government
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people
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companies
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organization's
people
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sports
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involve
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the
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conclusion
conclustion
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governments
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communities
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benefit
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