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WHAT ARE THE PROS AND CROS FOR CHILDREN OF WATCHING TELEEVISION?

#cros #children #teleevision
These days, public debate has been
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going
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whether
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the
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permission
of
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 kids to watch television. For many parents, to let them
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spend too much time in front of
TV
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 could bring some issues and
other
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 believe
that is
 common and there is no problem.
However
, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
this
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why some children are negligenciated in watching
TV
 and others are avoiding it. Let's begin by
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looking
 at the advantages of restricting
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youngers to spend their precious time in front of the screen. One of the main
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 of it is that too much light against young eyes can be dangerous for their quality
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of vision
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. What I mean by
this
 is that the eye is growing
day
 by
day
 and it is not ready to receive a high quantity of blue light
which
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emitted
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 by the television. To illustrate
this
 matter, an article
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 by some doctors
of
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 of the population which
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glasses by the
last
 generation.
Secondly
, it is impossible to limitate the information which the kid is receiving during his time on
TV
. Take
HBO
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 channel
for example
. During the same
day
, they transmit movies for kids and adults, which make
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insusceptible
 to always check what our
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child
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 is watching. Turning to the other side of the argument, there are too
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 options
of
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 good subjects with
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focus
in
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 learning. Many parents let their kids
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 programs
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about
 history, nature or
politics
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contents
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 intending to help their
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learnings
learning ship
. Another pro is
that is
 important to
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younger has a
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hobby
hobbies
 and some programs can support
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it, like sports, arts or tourism.
This
 action, when
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controlled
, in order to improve their
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education
, should be encouraged for one or two hours per
day
. All things considered,
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 of
TV
 by youngers can be dangerous. You need to weigh up the pros of the
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 contents,
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and
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 the cons of vision problems or
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 destinated to
olders
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holders
. Personally, I tend to believe that health issues eventually outweigh any positives.
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