The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.
This
chart
illustrates the money consumption
Replace the word
consumed
on
fast foods including Change preposition
by
hamburger
, Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
pizza
,fish
and chips
in Britain during the year 1919 .
By
the Change preposition
From
chart
,it is obvious that hamburger
had the highest earnings proportion Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
in contrast
by
Change preposition
to
fish
,chips
and pizza
.Meanwhile,we notice that in both high and average income, hamburger
was mostly used or Add an article
the hamburger
a hamburger
eats
by people.
Wrong verb form
eaten
Pizza
was choosed
between Correct your spelling
chosen
5to
10 Correct your spelling
5 to
percent
and it had the lowest percentage of cost , Change the spelling
per cent
while
fish
and chips
were the most available fast foods in
the same time.
By looking at the other Change preposition
at
chart
precisely,we understand that from 1970to
1990 Correct your spelling
1970 to
pizza
had a decreasing trend from approximately 300 to 200,so the amount of eating it and paying for it was declining.
About fish
and chips
,the second chart
represents a completely increasing process equall
to almost 400 Correct your spelling
equal
equally
vice
versa.Correct word choice
and vice
Hamburger
is just like fush
and Correct your spelling
fish
chips
in varing
by a significant margin.Correct your spelling
varying
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