You have been doing som e voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter • describe the work you have been doing • explain why you can no longer do this work • recommend anotherperson who is interested in the work

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Dear Michael, I am writing to inform you that

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circumstances beyond my control, I am no longer able to continue working in my current voluntary role as a community support officer. My role as a

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entailed regular meetings with the homeless and other impoverished members of the local community, and passing on the information gained from these meetings to the local council's liaison for social improvement. I was

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responsible for maintaining

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provision of food, blankets and stocks of other essential items for the community's homeless outreach centres.

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I found the work incredibly rewarding, I have been offered a paid position as a secretary for the Social Affairs Department, and as

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, I am now unable to commit to the number of hours that are required of a

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, I believe that the current deputy

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David Swan, would be more than willing to accept a promotion to the role of full

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, and would be able to accept

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position at the earliest opportunity.

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, I request that

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Swan be hired as my replacement for the

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position with immediate effect, in order to minimise any potential disruption to essential services. I look forward to your response.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

206 words

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

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