The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
sales
and usage of coffee
and tea in Sydney
, Melbourne, Adelaide, and Hobart
in Australia. Overall
the highest trend had shown in visiting a cafe for coffee
or tea while
buying fresh coffee
in the last
four weeks, however
, sales
of instant
coffee
are in mid-range compared to the other two in five cities.
Firstly
sales
of fresh coffee
in Sydney
have the highest rate of 44% while
in Melbourne and Hobart
at over 40$, nevertheless
, Adelaide and Bristban have sales
below 40%. Hobart
and Brisban have higher sales
of instant
coffee
over 50% but Adelaida has 50% usage. Sydney
and Melbourn's instant
coffee
sales
are below 50%. Furthermore
, The lowest sales
of instant
coffee
are higher than the lowerest sales
of fresh coffee
by comparison
of all five cities
To conclude
Sydney
, Melbourn, Brisbane and Hobart
have over 50% rates of visiting a cafe. However
, Adelaide has the lowest sales
which are close to 50% but it's higher than the other two types of lower-rate sales
of fresh coffee
and instant
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