The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
sales
and usage of
coffee
and tea in
Sydney
, Melbourne, Adelaide, and
Hobart
in Australia.
Overall
the highest trend had shown in visiting a cafe for
coffee
or tea
while
buying fresh
coffee
in the
last
four weeks,
however
,
sales
of
instant
coffee
are in mid-range compared to the other two in five cities.
Firstly
sales
of fresh
coffee
in
Sydney
have the highest rate of 44%
while
in Melbourne and
Hobart
at over 40$,
nevertheless
, Adelaide and Bristban have
sales
below 40%.
Hobart
and Brisban have higher
sales
of
instant
coffee
over 50% but Adelaida has 50% usage.
Sydney
and Melbourn's
instant
coffee
sales
are below 50%.
Furthermore
, The lowest
sales
of
instant
coffee
are higher than the lowerest
sales
of fresh
coffee
by comparison
of all five cities
To conclude
Sydney
, Melbourn, Brisbane and
Hobart
have over 50% rates of visiting a cafe.
However
, Adelaide has the lowest
sales
which are close to 50% but it's higher than the other two types of lower-rate
sales
of fresh
coffee
and
instant
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, sydney, hobart, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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