The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
sales
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and usage of
coffee
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and tea in
Sydney
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, Melbourne, Adelaide, and
Hobart
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in Australia.
Overall
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the highest trend had shown in visiting a cafe for
coffee
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or tea
while
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buying fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks,
however
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,
sales
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of
instant
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coffee
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are in mid-range compared to the other two in five cities.
Firstly
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sales
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of fresh
coffee
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in
Sydney
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have the highest rate of 44%
while
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in Melbourne and
Hobart
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at over 40$,
nevertheless
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, Adelaide and Bristban have
sales
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below 40%.
Hobart
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and Brisban have higher
sales
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of
instant
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coffee
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over 50% but Adelaida has 50% usage.
Sydney
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and Melbourn's
instant
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coffee
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sales
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are below 50%.
Furthermore
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, The lowest
sales
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of
instant
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coffee
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are higher than the lowerest
sales
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of fresh
coffee
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by comparison
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of all five cities
To conclude
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Sydney
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, Melbourn, Brisbane and
Hobart
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have over 50% rates of visiting a cafe.
However
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, Adelaide has the lowest
sales
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which are close to 50% but it's higher than the other two types of lower-rate
sales
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of fresh
coffee
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and
instant
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, sydney, hobart, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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