The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
sales
and usage of Use synonyms
coffee
and tea in Use synonyms
Sydney
, Melbourne, Adelaide, and Use synonyms
Hobart
in Australia. Use synonyms
Overall
the highest trend had shown in visiting a cafe for Linking Words
coffee
or tea Use synonyms
while
buying fresh Linking Words
coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
four weeks, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
are in mid-range compared to the other two in five cities.
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Firstly
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sales
of fresh Use synonyms
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Sydney
have the highest rate of 44% Use synonyms
while
in Melbourne and Linking Words
Hobart
at over 40$, Use synonyms
nevertheless
, Adelaide and Bristban have Linking Words
sales
below 40%. Use synonyms
Hobart
and Brisban have higher Use synonyms
sales
of Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
over 50% but Adelaida has 50% usage. Use synonyms
Sydney
and Melbourn's Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
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sales
are below 50%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, The lowest Linking Words
sales
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instant
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coffee
are higher than the lowerest Use synonyms
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coffee
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by comparison
of all five cities
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To conclude
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Sydney
, Melbourn, Brisbane and Use synonyms
Hobart
have over 50% rates of visiting a cafe. Use synonyms
However
, Adelaide has the lowest Linking Words
sales
which are close to 50% but it's higher than the other two types of lower-rate Use synonyms
sales
of fresh Use synonyms
coffee
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instant
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