In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Study
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history
could make
people
learn
cultures
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about cultures
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and
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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about our ancestors. When
people
learnt
history
, they would
knew
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how to improve themselves and avoid some of
damages
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occurred again. Different
building
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buildings
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told different stories. Entering a traditional Chinese building,
people
could see a lot of art
crafts
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and crafts
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inside it. There might have some stone and wooden cravings on pillars and windows and paintings of plants, flowers and animals on walls.
While
finding the
history
of their
houses
,
people
could not only hear
about
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stories about those artworks but
also
gain
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the wisdoms
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wisdoms
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wisdom
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of
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from
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their ancestors. How our
houses
were built and why our
houses
had been built provided
people
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with knowledges
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knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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of
structures
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the structures
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of
buildings
. Combining old skills with new materials could make
buildings
stronger. Learning things from
historic
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the historic
a historic
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building
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buildings
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was helpful for
people
to build new
buildings
. There were plenty of ways for
people
to find out the
history
of their
houses
. They could search
information
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for information
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online to find out the time when those
buildings
had been built and the culture of the period. In libraries,
people
might find a lot of
history
recorded via literature. Compared to the type of information in libraries, we could learn
our
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houses
history
by looking at photos and items in museums. From the factors above, I personally believed that
people
are interested in finding out about the
history
of the
buildings
they lived in
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because they know that learning
history
is an important way to gain more
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
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of
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about
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their ancestors. The more
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
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people
could gain, the easier they could improve themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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