Precooked or convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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the innovation of microwave and other cooking devices, we have reached the limits of natural proportion
time
, when simple sapience, waiting for it to pay off, demonstrates us an example of
taste
increases within
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taken over
cooking
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.
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there has been an effort from human innovation to decrease the
time
but no losses on the
taste
such
as signs of Fast
food
or Ready to eat. But is it actually worth the money or is it
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one big scam decreasing the
taste
of the
food
, arguing within the speed of preparation
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Are we able to find the future of cooking in
this
way, or is it just a waste of
time
? Today, I am going to discuss the key questions regarding our tradition connecting to the culture and put an effort to solve
this
mysterious situation. At
sight
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precooked foods may look like a good idea.The customer does not have to take apart his
time
to cook good
food
, the prices of these products are necessarily high and
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this
invention
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we are teaching young people to become independent, most of them are students and teenagers,
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is giving
an
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opportunity to their parents to take a rest after work and not preparing
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food
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food
for their little angels.
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if we would take a look at nutrition worth or the
taste
by
it-self
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, there may be a few disagreements regarding the correct way of independence or even rejection of traditional
food
as it happened in France regarding fast
food
in school
cantique
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antique
. Most of the
time
precooked or convenience
food
is getting closer to Fast
food
than we would even believe. Within the decrement of the
time
taken to prepare the
food
, the
taste
naturally became impaired as the Ingredients have not been made to remain preeminent, but only prolonged. I personally believe that the best example we may find is Lasagne. Everybody loves them, but only an experienced cook knows that it is incredibly challenging to create
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perfectly at the rate of Ingredients.
Therefore
, most of the
time
when someone is eating Lasagne at home, it has been already
precooked
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and only prepared for one lonely evening. In my opinion, precooked or convenience
food
is not able to replace the traditional way of cooking, as the
taste
is missing. Within
this
conclusion, I disagree with the statement that it is the future and personally believe in the tradition of our culture.
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