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is very essential in

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of life. Some

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suggest that a big income is important for

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nowadays and after retirement.

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all of, the

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careers will receive a

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much more than

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big income is very important for existence because we can’t estimate

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economy certainly whether it will increase or decrease, when the product price raise, we will save

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easy than another

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big income makes us unhappy, it will affect us to have no

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motivation of working, until want to leave from

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, co-workers don’t participate in working and accuse us of things that are not true.

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will be an important factor for a living but if the environment of working is bad, we should leave

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the

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for better mental health.

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progress in working fast than

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good environment can encourage diligence to work. The administration of

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can affect to specify the rate of

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, by career be paid attention to, they will give helpfulness extremely.

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can heal a lot of

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the benefits of

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and offer to help with scholarships to the university and

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in

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. I think that

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should pay attention to each career equally because

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will be able to choose a profession that they like rather than choose a profession that does not like but more

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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more advantageous for choosing a big

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to be lived conveniently in

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emergency situations and

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should regard the importance of all careers should be equality to choose the

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that we like, not choose from amount of

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