You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. apologise for the damage to the item explain what happened say how you are going to fix the issue

Dear Simon, I hope you keeping well. I am writing

this

letter because I wanted to let you know something happened a couple of days ago. Nothing vital but I'm embarrassed at least. As a matter of fact, I crashed the bike I borrowed from you

last

month. I was on the way home when a car suddenly crossed the road and I couldn't avoid it. No worries, I'm fine but I cannot pretend the same for your belonging. Against all odds, the front wheel has been damaged

as well as

your favourite little horn. I am so confused actually, and so I already brought the bicycle to the shop next door for repair. The technician said that It should take around a fortnight to be fixed and it should look brand new. Plus, as I take responsibility, the bill coming will be on me.I wish you will not be upset reading the news. Regards, Sebastien, your roommate

Submitted by laniesse.sebastien on Tue Jan 31 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

158 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Borrowed
Unfortunate incident
Regret
Unintentional
Circumstances
Remedy
Repair
Replacement
Sincerely
Forgiveness
Rectify
Understanding

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