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With the widespread use of the Internet, more people choose to work or study from home. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, more and more
people
 prefer to do remote
work
 or
study
 from their own place thanks to broad internet usage.
In
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 my perspective, I agree that it has more benefits than its drawback. The obvious disadvantage of
this
 trend is loose management. The owner of the company or staff
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management
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 level has limited control
for
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over
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 their employees. At the same time, professors who conduct
remote
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a remote
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lecture
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lectures
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 for their students have
same
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 obstacles. Both of cases, they don’t know exactly if
people
 are concentrating on their own
task
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 or just they are pretending and do nothing. Regardless of the fact, remote
work
 or
study
 make
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 to carry out
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 of achievement for managers and instructors.
On the other hand
, there
are
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significant
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advantage
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advantages
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of
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this
 trend.
For
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the
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first,
people
 can save energy for tasks by saving
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the times
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times
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which
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needed for commuting. They can put more effort
on
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 their job or assignments with
clear
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a clear
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 mind which brings better performance.
In addition
,
people
 don’t need to worry about
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 and it means remote
work
 brought less usage of transportation which
result
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results
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 in less carbon emission.
In other words
, remote
work
 or
study
 can contribute to
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.
Lastly
, by overcoming space and time
barrier
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barriers
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,
eventually
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people
 can focus on their life which causes
closer
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the closer
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relationship
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relationships
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 between
family
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families
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. In conclusion,
although
the
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working or studying at home has
issue
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 about controlling, the current trend to
work
 and
study
 remotely is
mostly
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 beneficial as it allows
people
 to achieve better performance of tasks and
relationship
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relationships
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 with family,
also
 its contribution
for
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the eco
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eco system
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • flexible schedule
  • commuting
  • carbon emissions
  • productivity
  • distractions
  • isolation
  • collaboration
  • remote communication
  • overworking
  • burnout
  • self-discipline
  • self-motivation
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