Today, people have become accustomed to living in “throwaway” society which means that they use things for a short time and then throw away. What are the causes of this? What problems may this lead to?

Nowadays, there is a huge
wasting
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waste
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problem
in our society and
people
sometimes do not have the
awareness
to
reues
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reuse
or recycle many things
such
as
plastic
bags.
However
,
this
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these
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behaviours can make a big environmental
problem
and
also
a waste of social resources. In
this
essay, the causes and the problems of
this
situation will
discussed
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. These days, the amount of
wasting
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waste
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is
remarkablely
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remarkably
remarkable
increasing compared with decades ago. The shortage of
people
's
awareness
to reuse could be the first reason.
According to
a study from Korea, more than 900 tons of
plastic
bags are just used once and thrown away by
people
a year in
this
country.
This
is a very bad
habbit
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habit
as
plastic
bags are durable and
people
can use
it
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them
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for
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apply
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several times
witout
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without
any
problem
.
However
, there are only
few
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a few
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people
who
has
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have
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the
awareness
to reuse them.
This
second reason is the low cost of "throwaway".
This
happened not only
on
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in
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those
plastic
products but
also
food
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in food
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.
Food
is becoming more and more cheap and
accessable
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accessible
in developed
countrie
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countries
and in most developing countries with the development of technology.
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let
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lets
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some
people
do
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not
value
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food
and just throw
away
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it away
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if they do not like it. Thousands of tons of
food
can be wasted by individuals and
hospitality
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the hospitality
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industry.
Due to
such
amount
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an amount
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of waste, some environmental problems can be caused.
Plastic
products can
last
over a hundred year, even
it
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if it
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has been buried and
this
huge amount of waste can pollute our land and ocean.
Moreover
, animals can
also
be affected negatively as countless animals
such
as sea turtles and seals dead from eating
plastic
products
accidently
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accidentally
.
Secondly
,
food
wasting
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waste
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is making some
people
's life worse. There are still millions of
people
who are suffering from
starving
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starvation
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in the world today. They could have got
enought
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enough
support if
people
can save their
food
and donate to them. In conclusion.
"throwaway"
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a "throwaway"
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society is the
last
thing
people
want to see. The reasons
of
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for
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this
sitution
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situation
could be the lack of
awareness
and the low cost of
wasting
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waste
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and
this
will lead
some
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to some
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serious
problem
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problems
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such
as
environment
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pollution and more starving
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • throwaway society
  • consumer culture
  • planned obsolescence
  • technological advancements
  • obsolete
  • durability
  • waste generation
  • landfills
  • pollution
  • household finances
  • resource depletion
  • raw materials
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