You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Hi Paris, Hope you are well. Thank you again for letting me stay at yours, it was

extraordinary

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time for me. :) I am writing

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letter, regarding my documents on

memory

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stick which I believe I left at your house. Could you please check your bottom drawer next to the window ? That was the location I kept all my paperwork and memory stick. It is very important for me, as in

few

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days I have a meeting with

Client

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the Client

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were

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I need to present all points from

seminar

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a seminar

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have

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attended during my stay at yours. I would like to kindly ask you if you could open my memory stick on your laptop and just forward all information via

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Please let me know ASAP. Thank you again for a beautiful time. I really enjoyed my stay, because of you and especially I will never forget our trip to Sydney haha. Can't wait to see you soon, Love, Martyna

Submitted by martynaa.j on Tue Jan 31 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations whilw others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages and your opinion.

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this case? What problem can it cause?

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her