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THE MOST VALUABLE AND INSPIRATIONAL TEACHER IN MY LIFE

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We all have the most valuable and inspirational
teachers
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 in
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. When we used to be small kids we used to love
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 if they used to be nice and friendly with us and we used to study that subject very interestingly. That love and affection towards our
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 used to be true and unconditional. But as we grow up, as our age passes we come across many things, many people who teach us many things conditionally or unconditionally or we come across things fortunately or unfortunately.
Teacher
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 at whichever age they may be creates their own space in our lives and we start respecting them for their subject knowledge, for their behaviour towards us and many more. The most valuable and inspirational
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 in my
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 was the Gracy
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. She used to teach me when I was in Jr. KG. She was my favourite
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, I don’t know why I loved her or what was the reason why I got attached to her so much. I remember my grandma telling me stories of my childhood which included the Gracy
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 as well. She says, I never used to write my exams until and unless she used to come in the class. To the
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extent I remember she used to be very friendly with me. I was her favourite student. She used to give me special attention. I was not at all comfortable with the other
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 as they used to be quite strict with us. But she was a gem. As I grew up I came across many
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, tutors etc… but I could not make that connection with any of those
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. But now I got another
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 who took place in my
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, in my heart as
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teacher
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 had taken. She is none other than Vaishali ma’am. I met her just a year ago when I was doing my B.ed (Bachelor of Education). In the initial ,stages I thought she is very strict but later ,
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 when I started having conversations with her I came to know she is a very nice human being with a helpful nature. She is very straightforward, she needs everything to be perfect. I always say my mother is a very big critic of my
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. But whatever and whenever she says and when I follow those points I have always succeeded only. It is the same
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 with Vaishali ma’am, whenever she scolds me I can see my mother who is correcting me if I am wrong and guiding me to choose the right
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. I like the
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 she dresses up, the
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 she talks, her body language, and the
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 she teaches.
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 she is the proper example of a
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. I always think if I will get a job or later when I will become a
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 I will follow in her footsteps and become like her. I feel blessed to have her as my mentor.

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