during a recent palne journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurent .You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurents. Write a letter to this businessman . In your letter Remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are intrested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Mr Smith, I was your co-passenger on your recent Indigo flight travelling from Delhi to Hyderabad on the 31st of January 2020. During one of our conversations, you were telling me about the chain of restaurants you own in Hyderabad and have some vacancies for a Manager position. I am currently in search of a job as I will be relocating to my hometown to stay with my family from March 1st of
this
year. I am looking for a store manager or a supervisor role with the past experience I had working at one of the top restaurants in Delhi, the Stone House. I have been working for over 3 years as an assistant manager at the Stone House where I was responsible for keeping the accounts, paying the salaries to staff on time and working with the vendors to order the required groceries for the store. I think
this
experience makes me a good suitable for the job at your place. Please find the attached CV and contact details. It would be greatly appreciated if you can get back to me at your earliest convenience. Kind Regards, Varsha.
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