Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
All
hobbies
have a good effect side to people whether they are outdoor Use synonyms
hobbies
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activities
. But they have counterparts too. I will give a reason from my point of view below.
On the one hand, the clear benefit of having outside Use synonyms
activities
is you are likely to exercise more than sitting in front of the screen computer. Having got exercise produces good chemistry inside your blood called adrenaline that makes you happy. Use synonyms
Additionally
, moving all parts of the body can make you healthy and get your body perfect. Another good reason to have outdoor Linking Words
activities
is to catch some fresh air and sightseeing. Some children are more like going to have fun outside the house because they get tired of being at home. Going outside means you can meet new people and make friends with them. You can develop communication Use synonyms
skills
and life Use synonyms
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such
kinds of Linking Words
activities
too.
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On the other hand
, If a person kind of introvert type person probably. Seeing friends, and making new connections is not kind of their thing so having Linking Words
hobbies
inside their house is suit them better. Playing game is not a bad idea. Some games need to be planned before playing. In Use synonyms
this
case, your child can develop planning Linking Words
skills
, and analytic Use synonyms
skills
including numerous Use synonyms
skills
. Children tend to be more thinking step by step. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, children should divide Linking Words
time
and reserve Use synonyms
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other thing thing
too. Because some times, adolescents tend to over-concentrate on the computer so they forget to have lunch or contact with people around them and Change the wording
another thing thing
other thing things
then
resulting in health injured in long term.
In conclusion, all Linking Words
hobbies
are good for anyone unless you can manage your Use synonyms
time
to do something else too and has parents to keep supervise in case their addicted. For me, I prefer having outside Use synonyms
hobbies
to being stuck in the house. it can make me get a new environment and Use synonyms
time
to meet new friends.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite