Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Having a hobby we enjoy can bring joy and enriches lives, it gives us the opportunity to do the things we enjoy during our leisure
time
. It can also
be a stress buster and reduce boredom.This
essay will tackle the main two reasons which are lack of time
and technological advancement why a lesser number of people
engage in their hobbies
which can give a negative effect.
Many people
nowadays,
are working too hard to provide financial stability to themselves and to their families, and they tend to stay up too late working or even have two jobs to fulfil what their family needs, Remove the comma
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for
this
reason, they have no time
to do any hobby. Instead
of enjoying time
doing their hobbies
, like those who love painting, cooking, Correct word choice
and gardening
gardening
they end up just keep working, Add a comma
,gardening
while
these hobbies
can be stress buster them and give them feeling
of fulfilment.
Correct article usage
a feeling
On the other hand
, because of technological advancements like the internet, computers, and smartphones, people
are spending a lot of time
on these gadgets, where they are glued to their phones checking updates on Facebook and Instagram, watching youtube videos and vlogs, as well as
staying on the tv watching Netflix, which they are not aware how long they spent time
on this
technology already. They prefer to stay on the internet instead
of going to the gym to exercise. For
this
reason, they lack exercise, where the level of dopamine(happy hormone), and serotonin (mood enhancer) are also
decreasing, which likely leads them to stress and depression. Moreover
living a sedentary lifestyle gives rise to many diseases like,
diabetes, heart problem and obesity.
In conclusion, Remove the comma
apply
people
nowadays work too hard to provide financial stability for their family and have no time
to do their hobbies
, as well as
people
are glued to technological advancement, which gives them no chance of having physical activities, which affects individuals negatively either physically or mentally well-being.Submitted by leoriemadeo1287 on
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