Social media is becoming increasingly popular among st all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Social media is becoming an essential part of our lives, in
which
we have possessed these magical tools for less than 30 years. Eating a mediocre breakfast, travelling to a city that local folk hate, or taking a photo in front of a tourist site as millions of people did could be a normal post that was made tons trillions of times every day on social networks. We love it, enjoy it and discard the consideration of privacy protection and risks. Correct pronoun usage
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Nevertheless
, the Internet gave us huge advantages but also
put humankind in dangerous circumstances as well.
Firstly
, without protection, personal information is spread everywhere under Social Engineering Tools. For example
, an illegal copy of Social Engineering (leaked personal data) is sold cheaply on the underground market, in which individuals' passwords, bank accounts, credit card info, and home addresses are listed in a mega text file without being encrypted. That is
a huge risk for everyone, not only the loss of money but also
the safety of life and family members.
Furthermore
, surfing the web and posting or commenting on social media are the main activities of our routine life for most society in their leisure time from morning to midnight. Like playing TikTok, endless scrolling by fingers to watch videos instead
of reading or walking kills our mental activities and our body's health. In China, a
latest research shows over 69% of high school students spend more than 8 hours on their smartphones, causing serious family problems and making teenagers lack body exercise.
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However
, social media is a revolutionary invention in the history of human beings, but everything has a double edge. The human species always like
to try things that look interesting and fun but are very harmful. There are too many examples of Correct subject-verb agreement
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. The widespread popularity of social networks means a vague and unknown future.Submitted by nordenbox on
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