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The table illustrates the forested land in millions of
hectares
of different continents in the years of
1990, 2000 and Change preposition
apply
of
2005. During Change preposition
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this
time the African, North America, Oceanian and South American forests
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forest's
forests'
hectares
descended overtime
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over time
However
, whilst the other regions had a progressive decrease, the North American forest
land remained stable between 2000 and 2005.
In addition
, from 1990 to 2005, Asia and Europe were the only ones whom
had an increase in their Correct pronoun usage
that
forest
area
were Asia and Europe. Regardless of the rise in the forest
hectares
between the time frame mentioned previously, in 2000
the Asian forests had a slight reduction of their Add a comma
,2000
hectares
.
Moreover
, there is a significant difference in the forest
area
between the continents. Furthermore
, while
the vast majority of territories have an average of seven hundred million
hectares
, Oceania had 197 million
hectares
while
Europe had 1001 million
hectares
of forest
area
, overall
in 2005, hence
the country with the most forest
hectares
.
Thus
, subsequently
, South America comes in second place with the most forest
area
. In 2005, the continent reported 882 million
hectares
of forest
area
hence
, 12 million
hectares
less than the European continent.
To sum up
, the fluctuation of the forest
area
was different depending on the part of the world.Submitted by heyohbruv on
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