In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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citizen decide
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construct in the
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. I believe
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to choose the look of their own building. And of
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there are some
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advantages
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to choose the look they like about their own property.
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