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The line graphs illustrate the statistics for international
tourist
arrivals
 in some  parts of the world from the year 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, the
number
 of international
tourist
arrivals
 increased in different parts of the world over the period of 15
years
 but the highest
arrivals
 were seen in North
America
whereas
 the lowest
arrivals
 were seen in South
America
 in 2005. In 1990, 70
million
people
 arrived in North
America
,
however
, only 30
million
people
 and 20
million
people
 arrived in Central and Eastern Europe and in South-East Asia respectively.
Thoughfor
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Though for
 the next 10
years
,the amount of
tourist
arrivals
 increased moderately in North
America
, Central and Eastern Europe  and South-East Asia but for the next 5
years
 the
number
 of international tourists decreased slightly making it nearly 90
million
people
.
On the other hand
,international
tourist
arrivals
 increased steadily in Central and Eastern Europe and in South-East Asia for the next five
years
 touching at about nearly  85
million
people
 and 50
million
people
 respectively. In 1990, the
number
 of international tourists
were
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 the same for
Sub-Saharan
Africa
 and South
America
 which were about 10
million
people
. Over the  next 15
years
, the
number
 of foreigners increased gradually in both
Sub-Saharan
Africa
 and South
America
 but the
number
 of foreigners
were
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was
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 more in
Sub-Saharan
Africa
 in comparison to South
America
. In 2005, 20
million
people
 arrived in
Sub-Saharan
Africa
whereas
 nearly 15
million
people
 arrived in South
America
 which was the least among all the mentioned  countries.
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