You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report a malfunction of my Canon 911
printer
and can you please ask someone to come to fix it as soon as possible. I purchased the
printer
last
month to replace the old ink-jet
printer
. It was working perfectly and I have to say, it prints fast. I print a lot of paper every day, so I had to change the toner
last
week. Ever since there is a dark line on the left side of each printout. I checked both the scanner and the toner, but everything seems to be fine. I work from home daily,
therefore
a
printer
is a piece of essential equipment for work. I would really appreciate it if you could ask someone to come to check it out as soon as possible. Thank you and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I live in Barclays Park and can be reached at 1-948-202-2029. Best regards, Katherine
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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