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Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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At present,
schools
 give more emphasis on teaching traditional
knowledge
 rather than teaching their
students
 practical
knowledge
 which they will need in later
life
. Traditional
subjects
  do not come in handy when it is time for the modern working world.
This
 essay completely agrees with the above statement because traditional
subjects
 do not teach us about the realistic demands of the modern world.
Firstly
, traditional
subjects
 like maths, physics, and chemistry help us to educate and enhance our 
knowledge
 but it does not help us to know the basic needs of the modern world. It does not teach us how to save money, how to pay the bills or how to be a good citizen.
Although
schools
 concentrate more on teaching these traditional
subjects
 to their
students
 it does not teach them how to lead a proper
life
 .
For example
, a bright student may not be able to do good in
life
due to
 a lack of practical
knowledge
. He may have huge
knowledge
 about traditional
subjects
 but he will not be able to succeed in
life
 if he does not have practical
knowledge
.
Moreover
, one who has
good
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 command of  traditional
subjects
 will not be able to get  a job in future if he does not have practical and technical
knowledge
 . Technical skills help us in future to lead a better
life
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which
schools
 do not concentrate on.
Furthermore
, most of the
schools
 do not have their own playground,
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which
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 their
students
 do not get to know about the  importance of maintaining their health. All in all, the
subjects
 in which
schools
 give more emphasis on  teaching do not prepare the
students
 for their later
life
.
As a result
, they fall behind in the future and could not succeed.
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