Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or short of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

In
this
modern era, many individuals claim that it is superior to accept a terrible situation. The importance of
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unlike job was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many people believe that it is beneficial
while
others reject
this
notion. In my opinion,
this
notion has some advantages and disadvantages. The position of improving
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appears to be more rational. In
this
essay, we will address the positive and negative effects of
this
trend and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. Myriads of reasons are which will
further
elaborate
this
argument but the most preponderant fact is the population is fascinated by
jobs
because
unemployment
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rate is very high. Another pivotal aspect is
pandemic
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, and,
epidemic
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are plays
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a vital role in
this
situation,
for example
,
due to
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the Corana
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Corana
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Corona
Cortana
pandemic the population is lost millions of
jobs
.
Furthermore
, destructive countries
such
as India, and, Pakistan
have
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not fundamental resources, how
they
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provide an adequate workplace for society.
Additionally
, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that in
the
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China youngsters are not satisfied
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jobs
,
whereas
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they have no
an
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option.
Similarly
, huge organizations are make pressure on
excutives
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executives
for work,
therefore
they
not liked
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did not like
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their
jobs
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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