Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Myriads of people believe that with more and more over-the-top(OTT) platforms coming into the picture every single day and nowadays

theatres

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have become unpopular and outdated. I partially agree with the fact that they would no longer have the same glory as earlier

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these new streaming services cannot replace them entirely.

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with, numerous apps and websites have evolved over the

last

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couple of years especially since covid outbreak owing to the lockdown restrictions people couldn't really go to movie

theatres

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and watch

films

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, a wide range of these services have been received extremely well by the audience and many experts concluded that it would be the end of largescale movies.

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, the number of subscriptions to these applications

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as Netflix, Amazon Prime, Hot start etc., has been growing significantly higher. As a matter of fact, more and more

films

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started to get released on these platforms either directly or within a few days after their release.

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, in spite of that immense shift, as soon as the restrictions were lifted, most of the cinema halls had good occupancy similar to earlier times.

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, the Indian film RRR which was released recently went on to become one of the top 3 highest-grossing

films

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in Indian history.

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this

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is not the case with every single movie, a few

films

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did not receive the same reception from crowds because of the change in trend. To be practical,

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trend would

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continue leading to the shutdown of more and more

theatres

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, in the state of Andhrapradesh, at least 100

theatres

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were ceased and converted to shopping malls

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unpredictable business and heavy financial losses.

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, online streaming would eventually take over the large-scale cinematic experience in the majority of situations,

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, a few genres of movies that present visual feast would still continue to survive.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

318 words

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Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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