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Many animals are kept in zoos today. What are the advantages of keeping animals in the zoo?

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The diagram illustrates information about the developments made to the museum
plan
 between the years 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear from the picture that there were noticeable changes done to the
plan
. The permanent
exhibition
 rooms were greatly reformed. To start with, some of the permanent
exhibition
 rooms were located on the top left of the
plan
 in 1998. A decade later, in the same place, they put a restaurant and moved the temporary
exhibition
 room from the bottom left corner (in 1998) to the centre.
Moreover
, what was a cafe before was divided into 2 and became a cafe and a WC. Moving on, the garden (in1998) was developed, they added fountains and built a cafe sitting area.
Furthermore
, where there was a temporary
exhibition
 room, they built a shop and added a place for bags and coats. On the permanent
exhibition
 rooms on the right side, the
plan
 of 2008 removed the shop and bags and coats to the opposite side.
However
, tickets and entrance remained unchanged after a decade.
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