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Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The diagrams illustrate a layout of
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the exisiting
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exisiting
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existing
 floor
plan
 and
proposed
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the proposed
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 version of
floor
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the floor
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plan
 which are planning to
change
.
Overall
, the floor
plan
 has two main rooms which are
kitchen
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the kitchen
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 and living room
in
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on
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 the left and right sides respectively. There are
stairs
 in the middle between these two rooms. Apparently,
existing
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the existing
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 living room has a door located beside the
stairs
.
Internal
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The internal
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 wall is
planed
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planned
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 to remove in the future.
Moreover
, the straight
stairs
is
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are
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 going to
change
 into round
stairs
 on the
proporsal
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proposal
 changes. Storage is currently located under the
stairs
 and will be removed
due to
 the
physically
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change
 of
stairs
.
Kitchen
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The kitchen
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 is
also
 in the
plan
 of changes, a single door will be changed into double doors and
re-located
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relocated
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 nearby the middle main entrance door. There is a
noticably
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noticeably
noticeable
change
 in
kitchen
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the kitchen
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 which is
an
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the
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including of
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apply
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kitchen
 table located
in
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on
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 the left side of the room.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, change, kitchen, stairs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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