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It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Currently, we are informed that a cinema Hall is going to be constructed in our
locity
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locality
society
. As soon as the news
has
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spread,
controversys
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controversy
controversies
 begin to rise on whether the theatre should
be build
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 or not.
According to
 my viewpoint, a new movie Hall should result in high social interaction and economic development. Here, the following paragraphs aim to highlight some of the arguments in favour of my opinion. At the outset, films, as a
part
 of Entertainment are always
in
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 the top of
list
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 of all age groups.
In addition
,
people
 are often seen
to take
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part
 in a discussion related to the characters of a cinema or the contents. Historically, theatres were the place where
people
 could gather and took
part
of
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 discussions.
Unfortunately
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 it is replaced by CD and DVD players
then
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 by Netflix.
Consequently
,
people
 are forced to stay at home
an
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and
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 enjoy movies alone;
this
 situation would be changed by a modern Hall where they can watch films
in
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 a big screen and be a
part
 of socialization.
Likewise
, the cineplex is thought
as
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 a step that boosts our local business. It will pave the way to start new food corners and cafeterias where movie lovers can enjoy food
in
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the interval
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interval
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.
Moreover
, when the theatre will be Housefull, it will definitely inspire directors to direct quality cinema, and
producer
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producers
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 to produce as well.
Apart from
this
, our fragile entertainment industry might be facilitated. In a nutshell, altho the dependency on movie theatres decreases significantly,
further
 construction can and a new dimension.
People
 might come out and
economy
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 might
accelerated
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.
Hence
,
instead
 of its all counterparts, I find it hopeful.
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