International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

The number of

people

who travel abroad is rapidly increasing these days. Some argue that accepting

tourists

from overseas has positive impacts on countries,

while

I believe that the disadvantages are bigger. Some

people

claim that welcoming foreigners has a variety of advantages

especially

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in the economy of countries and these benefits overweigh the disadvantages.

This

is because

people

from other countries tend to spend huge sums of money on

such

as shopping and tours, and

such

activities are one of the factors that promote the economy where

people

can get higher salaries. Chinese

tourists

,

for example

, have purchased clothes and daily necessities in Japan so that the average salary increased.

This

is one of the examples of why some assert that the profits from accepting international tourism are bigger that the disadvantages.

However

, I believe that there are more negative influences of welcoming international

tourists

than positive ones because they damage important sites and species significantly. A large number of these

people

are incapable of understanding local languages so

that

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they are likely to damage inhabitants and the environment by breaking local rules to protect animals and places. The government reported that many places and species in Japan suffer from the bad behaviours of foreign

people

. The negative impacts,

therefore

, from international

tourists

outweigh the advantages.

To sum up

, despite there being arguments about benefits of the welcoming foreigners coming for sightseeing, I believe that the negative impacts are still bigger.