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Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

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It is often said that "
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 is the
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 expression" but when it comes to a job interview employers tend to notice your posture, attitude and the way you look. Leaving a positive image in front of a recruit can be the
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 step towards success.
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, an interviewer who is sitting on the other side has the power to make a decision so they should make the decision wisely. Community tend to not believe that
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 during an interview can not land you in a reputed company.
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, I think, a person well groomed will be considered to be a part of a company as he/she can represent the company well.
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, a person who is not dressed up properly but has brought productivity with his knowledge and skills won't get selected.
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, there are times during the questionnaire
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 may fumble or feel low in confidence that at that
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 the interviewer may select an individual who is more confident.
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, companies try to hire smart people rather than hiring people who will be taking a lot of
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 in learning a new skill. People with less knowledge might get hired if they can easily convince the recruiter that they are the perfect candidate for the job
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 the person who fails to convince will not be selected.
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, I strongly believe that if you look good and know how to attract individuals towards you
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 you can secure a good position. Remember, it is easier to confirm a positive
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 that to convert a negative
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 into a positive one, especially under the
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 constraints in an interview.
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