Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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One of the things we can see today in our world is
people
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moving abroad and leaving their countries for many reasons,
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as looking for better opportunities or a better
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. Nowadays, many
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are willing to have or to live new experiences, but not all of them are capable to do that in their own countries and the idea of moving abroad comes to their mind.
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, moving to another country sometimes means that the person needs to leave all of their
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behind to follow their own dream of having a better
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o sometimes better job opportunities, which they were not able to have in their own cities. There is a recent study that shows that
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moving abroad are closest to
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their personal goals than if they stay in the place where they were born.
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, immigration is not always a happy thing.
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who decided to leave their old
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and do whatever's necessary to reach the one that they always dreamed of, tended to face some kind of depression.
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is not a thing that happens many often, but it will be for those who were not capable of having the similar
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that they used to live.
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says that finding a group of
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living the same situation that those who feel depressed, could help them
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leave the problem aside and start living the new period of their
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better and more positively. Considering all of
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I can say that moving abroad is not always a happy or easy thing for many
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even if they can reach their
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's goals by doing that, they would need to be aware of what, the other side of that happiness, could bring.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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