The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The map depicts the changing in the rural area of Ryemouth from 1995 until now. In brief, the development
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the west side of the village are focusing on the food building and residential area,
whereas
on the east side
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changing on hobbies and sports places. In detail, before being altered to the restaurant, a row of shops was constructed on the west side of the settlement. In 1995, there were several fish markets and fishing ports at the beach so the population might
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fish after enjoying the beach. Surprisingly, all of them were altered into apartments.
In addition
, there is an enlargement of the housing area in the west-north of the map.
On the other hand
, after creating golf and tennis places, the government removed all of the farmland and forest garden. The authorities
also
build a new car park behind the hotel for people who wants to park their vehicles. In fact, the cafe still
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and remains unchanged between 1995 and the present day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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