The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie graphs depict the proportion of each society from
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and the prediction for 2050 which Use synonyms
is
categorized into three age groups. In brief, based on the forecast, all of the age groups will have downward trends, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
whereas
15-59s in Italy and 0-14s for both countries will have a downward tendency.
In detail, the percentage of elderly in Linking Words
Yemen
will Use synonyms
increased
moderately, from 3,6% to 5,7%. The Change the verb form
increase
be increased
15
-59 Correct quantifier usage
number of 15
years
old people Fix the agreement mistake
year
is
Change the verb form
is also predicted
also
predict to rise dramatically in Linking Words
Yemen
reveals from 46,3% to 57,3%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the number of children will have a dip from 3,6% to 5,7%.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the number of old people in Italy is Linking Words
also
predicted to soar if compared with other nations, which illustrates from 24,1% to 42,3%. The number of babies and toddlers is contrasting with Linking Words
Yemen
which has a major shoot up from 24,1% to 42,3%. Surprisingly, youngsters and adults are reducing from 61,6% to 46,2%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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