More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how they can be addressed?

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of solutions that should be implemented to deal with
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meals industry. Both
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better logistic, and
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with detrimental food are absolutely
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of regulation of
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rise
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product quality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • On-the-go lifestyle
  • Nutritional value
  • Home-cooked
  • Health consequences
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Meal prep
  • Time management
  • Culinary skills
  • Processed foods
  • Dietary habits
  • Food marketing
  • Value meals
  • Economic factors
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Cultural shifts
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