Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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some nations attain the achievement of international

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depends on facilities and promotion

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athletes,

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they believe that, building for non-athletes is not necessary

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has pros and cons. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision. Many support the view that international

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' achievement can become more famous in some countries

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which can enhance

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man's skills

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develop

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of nations.

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, if I were

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, I would need training places which are called fitness

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I could succeed in my competition

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fitness, I could not

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. What is more, only athletic building is crucial

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the fact that

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did not do runner action.

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, building for

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sports men

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and women is an essential activity.

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, everyone needs a place which

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their spare time properly

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It can prevent obesity. Currently, Obesity is soaring sharply owing to the deficiency of some places which can spend leisure time.

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remain in his own home and he would eat junk food because of lack of work. What is more,

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disease would spring

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cancer which can affect the economy

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gross domestic product well-being.

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,

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facilities are the most important and essential item. In a nutshell, improving some buildings is the most important

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which need everyone and athletes both needs. As far as people are concerned development is the needest subject and equality more need a thing.