The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much food people eat in seven different countries between 1975 and 2000. In general, we can see all countries eat more food now than they ate 25 years ago.
Some
region
experienced a large increase in calorie consumption over 25 year period. In 1975, China and Indonesia's people only consumed around 2000 calories per day Fix the agreement mistake
regions
while
in 2000 the number increased by 50 per cent to 3000 calories each day. Nigeria start with a little higher consumption number in 1975 than those two countries but only saw a 30 per cent of increased in 2000.
By comparison
, other region
only felt an under 600 increase in their people's calorie consumption. Change the wording
another region
other regions
For example
, Brazil and India saw around 500 and 450 inclined respectively whereas
Pakistan and Bangladesh only experienced a slight increase.Submitted by anisahn09 on
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