The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart depicts the customs Linking Words
about
purchasing and drinking Change preposition
of
coffee
or tea in five Australian Use synonyms
cities
, including Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
It is Use synonyms
obviously
that the Replace the word
obvious
residents
in four of the five Use synonyms
cities
prefer going to Use synonyms
café
to consuming at home in Correct article usage
a café
Linking Words
last
4 weeks. 63% of the Melbourne Correct article usage
the last
residents
consumed tea or Use synonyms
coffee
by going to the café, accounting for the highest proportion of all the Use synonyms
cities
. Approximately 61%, 56% and 63% of the Use synonyms
residents
in Sydney, Brisbane and Hobart did the same way.
Use synonyms
By contrast
, more citizens bought instant Linking Words
coffee
than drinking outside in Adelaide Use synonyms
last
month, taking up half of all. Linking Words
While
in Linking Words
other
four Correct article usage
the other
cities
, the Use synonyms
willing
of buying instant Replace the word
willingness
coffee
was in between Use synonyms
of
buying fresh Change preposition
apply
coffee
and drinking in Use synonyms
café
.
Apparently, all of the Correct article usage
a café
residents
in these Use synonyms
cities
do not enjoy purchasing fresh Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
comparing
to other drinking habits. Especially Wrong verb form
compared
Brisbane
and Adelaide, only about one-third of the Change preposition
in Brisbane
residents
bought fresh Use synonyms
coffee
recently.
In general, it can be proposed that Australian people consume Use synonyms
coffee
a lot, especially in café.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, residents, café with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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