The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart depicts the customs about
purchasing and drinking Change preposition
of
coffee
or tea in five Australian cities
, including Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
It is obviously
that the Replace the word
obvious
residents
in four of the five cities
prefer going to café
to consuming at home in Correct article usage
a café
last
4 weeks. 63% of the Melbourne Correct article usage
the last
residents
consumed tea or coffee
by going to the café, accounting for the highest proportion of all the cities
. Approximately 61%, 56% and 63% of the residents
in Sydney, Brisbane and Hobart did the same way.
By contrast
, more citizens bought instant coffee
than drinking outside in Adelaide last
month, taking up half of all. While
in other
four Correct article usage
the other
cities
, the willing
of buying instant Replace the word
willingness
coffee
was in between of
buying fresh Change preposition
apply
coffee
and drinking in café
.
Apparently, all of the Correct article usage
a café
residents
in these cities
do not enjoy purchasing fresh coffee
comparing
to other drinking habits. Especially Wrong verb form
compared
Brisbane
and Adelaide, only about one-third of the Change preposition
in Brisbane
residents
bought fresh coffee
recently.
In general, it can be proposed that Australian people consume coffee
a lot, especially in café.Submitted by xinyuepeach on
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