The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005

The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005
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The table illustrates a comparison of the use of four types of fuels
such
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as nuclear, coal and lignite, petroleum and hydro and wind to generate electrical
energy
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in five Asian countries in 2005.
Overall
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, the percentages of different fuel usage varied among the countries. Using coal and lignite were most predominantly used in Malaysia
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, South Korea and Japan focused on using nuclear
energy
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to produce electricity. It is evident that in Thailand there is no usage of nuclear
energy
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as converting petroleum products and other resources
was
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used in a larger fraction. Using hydro and wind power were less common in both Malaysia and Singapore which accounted for 5% and 3%, respectively. The Japanese were more inclined to form
energy
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using nuclear plants which accounted for 39%
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, they
also
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focused on using other resources rather than using coal or hydropower. Almost half of the electrical power generation in South Korea was formed by hydro and wind power and they accounted for a percentage of 48%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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