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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#english #school #languages #risk
Nowadays
English
 is considered
as
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one
 of the most important
language
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 when compared with other languages.
One
 of the reasons for its importance is that it can be understood almost in every country around the globe.
English
 is the native
language
 of most countries with large economies like America, Australia and England. In Pakistan, all the big schools emphasize more on
English
 they make sure that their students must know how to talk,write and speak in
English
.It is a common belief over here that if
one
 does not know
English
 there is a chance that he or she might be left behind. All the big and prestigious exams like
The
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the Civil services of Pakistan or Federal Service Commission exams have a compulsory section of
English
.
One
 of my friends has given a test recently for a job
although
 he got cleared in the written part but was not selected in the interview because of his lack of fluency in
English
.----------- he has all the qualities and skills that are required for the job but in today’s world the most important thing considered is how fluent a person is. In my ,opinion
one
 should have a grip on
English
 as it is a need of time. All the big firms require their employees to know
English
 because it is a source of communication between the company and international clients. All the applications we are using at present be it Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Whatsapp, Microsoft or programming
softwares
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 everything is in
English
.It is like an international
language
, two persons anywhere from the world strangers to each other with different backgrounds, cultures and languages can more likely talk only in
English
.
However
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 it's possible that may know some other same
language
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 but the chances of knowing
English
 are higher when compared with another lingo. Apart from knowing
English
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 it is
also
 necessary to enlist the importance of local languages in our kids because that thing defines who we actually are and
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where we belonged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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