Claiming the traditional schooling is out of date ,boring and stifles a child's natural talents,various professionals have pushed for an education revolution.Are there alternatives in the education system?Is traditional education doing more harm than good?give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people believe that conventional education does not boost children's talents which is
also
old and not useful. There are certain ways to redevelop the education system along with
the recent technological advancements otherwise
it is unlikely to raise talentful
generations.
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talented
To begin
with, since the world has been changing because of the latest innovation and globalisation, people should touch the 21st century with new educational methods rather than the traditional ones. The old system does not attract students
' attention because of the usage of materials. In other words
, face to face
lessons and following instructions of teachers are not helpful to raise creativity for Add a hyphen
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students
. By constrast
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students
interact with the last
technology by learning some computer programs, they can land in
a good job in the future and compete in the labour market.
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Furthermore
, the
today's teaching methods are not successful in the long term and Correct article usage
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also
make students
less active. To make it clear, many schools even today give heavy school
tasks which increases
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demotivations
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demotivation
demotivating
For example
, I used to refuse to go to school
because of unattractive and heavy school
tasks elated to rote-learning
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is why,
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such
as maths and physcis
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physics
However
, if school
subjects become interesting using the
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as telescope
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microscope
in science, it is likely to draw student attention.
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To conclude
, the traditional education system related to rote learning does not have advantages for students
. However
, this
problem can tackle by using the latest technology and making lessons more attractive.Submitted by ediz07 on
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