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17.It is better if an extended family (for example, aunts, uncles, grandparents) are involved in a child’s upbringing than just parents alone. Do you agree or disagree?

#aunts #uncles #grandparents #child’s #upbringing #parents
Family plays an important role in the
overall
 development of a
child
. Being a part of a big family not only inculcates
life
's morals but
also
 teaches the .
However
, the involvement of distant family members is vital but
parent's
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 guidance is more significant.
Firstly
, when the kids are brought up in an extended family they do not have freedom of speech in the house. Because of more
life
 experience older people take
life
 decisions for themselves. Even
thoughthey
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though they
 are not completely wrong it makes the
child
 vulnerable and dubious.
For instance
, sometimes
due to
 family pressure youngsters enter a career path, in which they are not interested and
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future regret the decision.
This
 makes their professional
as well as
 personal
life
 miserable.
Secondly
, if upbringing is done in a nuclear family
child
 gets more personal space to speak and express his or her opinions.
Parents
 can give all their attention and guidance to their offspring. In today's broad-minded world, youth wants to be accepted the way they are and
this
 is possible only in a close knight family. In my personal experience, the
child
 becomes independent and self-sufficient, when he realises the efforts of his or her
parents
.
Single
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child
 knows the
responsibiliity
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responsibility
 of their
parents
 and their well-being. To recapitulate,
child
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the child
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 is pampered and always told what to do by aunts and uncles in a family which makes them dependent on others for
life
.
Whereas
, being raised by
parents
 only gives a sense of independence and
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 resilience.
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