You have ordered a product on a websites and received a different product. Write a letter to the company. Write a letter

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Dear Sir. I am writing

this

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letter to complain about the product that I have ordered from your

websites

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website

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. If I

am not mistakes

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am not mistaken

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2 days ago. I ordered an

iPhone

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14 but, the product I received was an

iPhone

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13. I

esa

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was

indeed suspicious

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seeing the way it was packed.

However

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, I opened the box only after I saw

itʼs

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its

surface. I realized that

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this

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phone was different. I wonder how your workers got it wrong. At that moment, I called your company but, did not receive a satisfactory response. I have the order details with me. I paid one thousand

dollar

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for it

iPhone

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14 and the product I received

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apply

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was only seven thousand

dollar

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dollars

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. I would either require

refund

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a refund

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of money or replace

this

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phone with the

iPhone

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I ordered. I hope you will reply to me. Yours sincerely, Arianna

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

145 words

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