You recently travelled by train on a long journey and you experienced various problems. Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter, give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction ask about what action will be taken to improve the servic

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction and want to share issues which I have faced

while

travelling on a

train

that is

running under your supervision from Toronto to Windsor. I would like to tell you about my journey which started from

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the Toronto

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Toronto

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Toronto's

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downtown subway at 9 am on 30 December 2022. My seat number was C8 which was cabin number 5

of

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on

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the

train

. I want your attention towards your staff. Some crew members behaved badly with commuters. One lady asked for a bottle of water several times to a waitress but she ignored her. In

last

,

Instead

of apologising to a

customer

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she started arguing with her.

Moreover

, the washrooms were not cleaned properly .It was difficult to use the washrooms because of the bad smell.

In addition

, my seat was near

to

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the bathroom.

Thus

, it was difficult to sit there. I would appreciate it if you could take strict action against your employees who are not working properly.

Also

, it would be great if the

train

company hire more staff especially to clean the

train

and washrooms properly. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nick Jones