Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to moniter what people are saying and doing. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this devlopment outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology

has developed and constantly

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developing

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the

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such

as booking a cab or

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flight seat. Some people argue that it can be harmful in many ways.

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merits of

technology

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of it,

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advantages

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technology

are myriad

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various

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apps.

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can make human life

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extremely

convenient and do several things at

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from home.

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person

can get images from the whole world by just typing some words on the internet.

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place or

person

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it

provide

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anything from the address of that place to

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number whatever it is asked for.

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progress

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the

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technology

can be

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to

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store data from different places

according to

their importance for the future.

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this

way, it can save thousands of trees that will

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used to write. The benefits of

this

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truly truly

uncountable.

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, an individual must not forget that, to operate these all the advantages its needs

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a persons

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persons

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personal information . And

this

can cause many problems

to

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the user

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user

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users

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.

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agree

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for every

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and

terms

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may

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give

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permission to monitor its activities on

device

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the device

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.

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can include tracking location or operating

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,

this

can be a very disturbing experience for the user. But it can only happen if, the

person

is careless and unaware of the capabilities of

technology

. In conclusion, I believe if the

person

is careful and

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the instructions before signing in for any new application the benefits of

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modern

technology

certainly outweigh the disadvantages and even if not they can be neglected. Because the advantages are surely helping humans.